Reviews for Firefly |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Shikimi! It's very telling that he calls her his woman in his mind, and not girl. :( He really did love her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If only he approached her! But I guess they're both better off this way... It's just such a difficult, complicated situation. If he had treated her better, I would be all for them getting back together. But this conclusion just seems more right. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a beautiful and heartbreaking story! I loved every word of it! |
![]() ![]() i love this so much but hate it just as much for the bad ending :( no proper closure. its just all a misunderstanding |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw so he never gets to meet his son? Miana does end up having his son (Kunta) right? or am I just confused lol? Maybe you should write about Kunta's life or something! that would be great! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so broken hearted. Really. And reading this story while it's raining outside isn't helping at all. Can you please let Shikimi knows about Kunta? Another sequel please :)). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story in terms that it had me gripped so much. I guess the only thing I disliked was the fact that I was hoping Shikimi would somehow end up with Miana D: the story just left me feeling sad (but that's not your fault, it just mean't you wrote it brilliantly if you made me feel sympathy towards Miana) Well done :) maybe if you have time you can write a quick alternate ending for me? Miana Shikimi happy together while maybe pushing Ley-blah off a cliff? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to beat you up and hug you all at the same time! I'm totally upset and i want to cry and and so full of emotion. love hate love hate love hate love gah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate this whole fucking story becuase I love it so much I hate the fact that there's a lack of closure at the end, for Shikimi to realise and for them to have one last final meeting or something like that. It's so annoying and I love it all so much. I think there should be a third, just sayin' |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so sad, I wanted them to end up together! Your ending was good though just not the hollywood ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I really liked both stories. I had read the first one before, but I just reread it. :) I never would have guessed Shikimi would have reacted that way. But it makes me sad that he misunderstood that situation and would never know of his true firstborn... Which would make an interesting sequel. Coughcoughcough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The whole time I read this, I was like, "Woah. Shikimi has real, normal feelings?" In Dream Catcher, I was under the impression that he had this twisted, possessive, obsession with her that never really constituted as love. And maybe he didn't really love her till she slept with Xan. Now, I read what he's thinking and am blown that he actually had thoughts that concerned her well being. I wish he'd have gone to her when he saw her and his baby, instead of mistaking Daq as her lover and running away. But I can't say I was hoping he'd take her back. He was really abusive to her, didn't let her explain things, and didn't bother to take into account that she was raised to be monogomous and didn't fully accept the idea of him running around with his fiancee, and he ignored the agony she was in every day. He was really selfish and gave her only what he THOUGHT she needed instead of finding out what she really WANTED. but, I guess that was just who he was, but he changed, in a way, and really was more compassionate to his wives and kids after he got over the loss of Miana. So I guess he did develop and change because of her. However, I think her life practically sucked. Poor girl. In love with an abusive guy who made her, for the most part, feel worthless. Ah! The sadness! The tragedy! |
![]() ![]() I'm STILL mad at you for not having them get back together. . That is all. :] |