|Reviews for Faith|
| Sepulchred chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
So, your summary described it as exaggerated, but I think that's silly, probably because I know a lot of real wackos when it comes to religion. I love this. Your haikus are all so witty and well-phrased, and I really have to review just this one, otherwise you're going to get a flood of emails, all saying something along the lines of 'HA! This is clever.'.
Minor editing bit: 'everything's' rather than 'everythings''.
| Leaves of Labefaction chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
haha. I really like it. It's *perfect*.
| FlawlesslyImperfect chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
hahah loved it! The simplicity makes me think of something that a child would say if you asked them to define God. Excellent work
| MallowsWins chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Haha, I like it. Preying is the best way to do nothing while still feeling like you're helping. Nicely written, I like the cheekieness of it.
| systemofup chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
nice haiku ;)
| Amarone chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Hah, that brought out a smile of me. The word choice is excellent, and it really compliments the careless, free feeling of this. Nicely done :)
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
i see faith differently. but you portrayed your feelings on it nicely. keep writing.
| AHR chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Hahahahahahaha! Thats funny.