|Reviews for wind|
| aberlemno chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I really like this one. It's almost a song.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I really liked it but I thibnk it would be stronger to end it "wind I'm waiting for your touch" I don't know technical terms but the "and flow" isn't as strong.
| JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
This was very beautiful and shows forth a heart hungry for the touch of God. The Holy Spirit is the wind :-) I loved this.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
I think some of your parts need semi-colons or some periods. Other than that I liked it a lot. The parts where it repeats are relaly great and I love your images, especially in the first and second to last stanza.
| Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Another wonderful piece! It's beautiful and meaningful. The second stanza, I think, is my favorite, although its all really good. Kudos! ~CD
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Interesting ending. It's sort of...non-resolute? I don't know, but I liked the imagery and feelings that were expressed throughout. You did well, great job.
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
nice work. i really liked the line "change the rain to colors and sun." i think you did a nice job making the rhyme sound natural as well. you don't need the comma in the last line though. keep writing.