i like this one. totally describes the way a "good" friendship can roll down hill

Nice poem... It kinda not-really goes with this song ca./watch?vUybSgz_aaK4, don't watch the vid, just the song.

Sorry I haven't been on in a while and as you know Coopy just died today... Well, see you later.

Killian.

I like the fornever! Good job and good use of words, just one thing that I would consider changing, In the mud like sticks, maybe change it to like a rock. That might sound better. I thought it was a wonderful piece and you should be proud of it. I hope everything works out with you and your friend! God Bless!

I know this one, for sure. Nice rhyming.