|Reviews for Who Am I?|
| hitomi100 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
that is so confusing
| I see London I see Sam's Town chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I think the questions work well in the poem... Did you say your mom was in middle school when she wrote this? It's a good concept to write about, too.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Did you write this or did your mother? Either way I really like this poem.
| Halan Lore chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
-gives a little approving nod- your mom wasn't bad...
| Savella chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
I liked it. It was different from all your other poems, but not in a bad way. The change was almost...refreshing. Or just new and shiny. You captured the emotion in this very well. You can tell that you were confused. Good emotion to use. It really is mind-boggling to perceive our purpose in life and why we act the way we do. The house of toothpicks is a good analogy, because our life is fragile, and the things the world expects us to believe in can't stand up to the test of time. Overall, very...mature? Is that the word for it? Insightful? I dunno, but I know that I loved it!
By the way, who's holding the contest? Is it on FP?