Reviews for My Guardian Angel
Procrastynatyr chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
I like it. Could you include more deescripitions of Alexis? I also thought Lexy was spelled with only one x but I suppose it really doesnt matter... Will you be updating soon?
jessiblaze7 chapter 13 . 11/11/2010
This is a great story so far! I couldn't stop reading until I finished all the chapters (: Please update soon!
SakurasApprentice chapter 13 . 9/19/2010
*phew!* 13 reviews!

This story deserved it IT'S REALLY GOOD!

It's also very addicting!

Levi was so cute in this chapter!

Also, you can tell how he's making Lexxy a happier person...

Maybe you should draw (or get someone else to draw) Levi with these 'earth' clothes or better yet get like a character design sheet for Levi and Lexxy

One last thing... purple eyes... aw!

Oh! Another thing! (sorry) I just thouhgt I should let you know that in alot of published books that I read lately I can't seem to care about the characters however, with this I actually care about them and wants to know what happens next. Before I realised it you made me fall in love with these characters - Congratulations!
SakurasApprentice chapter 12 . 9/19/2010
This is such a sweet chapter that shows that Levi really cares about Lexxy's friendship and also that she cares :)

It was just one of those chapters that affects the heart

You have a talent for writing!

Also, I may check this other story out *wink*
SakurasApprentice chapter 11 . 9/19/2010
Fell in love with Levi in this chapter!

He has such a great personaility :)

Also, I like how Lex sees him and Thief as different uh entities? You know, she didn't just accept it right off the bat. You did this really well!
SakurasApprentice chapter 10 . 9/19/2010
I'm really glad you did a seperate chapter for thus - it adds to the tension!
SakurasApprentice chapter 9 . 9/19/2010

I have a feeling that Levi really grew to 'like' Lexxy as a dog!

And it's a little weird how Lexxy didn't get a little ticked at how her and Levi shared a bed (before she knew he was a shifter) and also I liked hearing about Maylanie's story
SakurasApprentice chapter 8 . 9/19/2010
Loved how the whole 'magic' thing was explained so well!

I can already see Levi's awesome (ass) personaility! XD
SakurasApprentice chapter 7 . 9/19/2010
Raliah is... I don't know...! At first I thought she was a you know... stereotype cheerleader or something but there is definetly brains behind the blonde!

Loved Thief trying to get the make-up away from Lex!

And *le gasp* Thief is human? Actually I kinda had that guessed BUT you did this VERY well!

SakurasApprentice chapter 6 . 9/19/2010

The racing and (screw it) Levi protecting Lexxy from that *insert swear word here* Alec!

This chapter was just so well done and brought the two so much closer!

Heheh 'Thief' when she called him that I thought his crime was stealing rather than *shuts up*
SakurasApprentice chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
Love Maylanie and Lexxy's friendship in this chapter, I grew to like her a lot more in this chapter!

'The (quite lovable) dog' following her to and from school is a really nice touch!

I love the way you convay Lexxy's emotions so flawlessly through first-person

And yeah still not sure whether to like Rebecca or not (actually Rebecca is my mum's name XD but we care about each other alot more)
SakurasApprentice chapter 4 . 9/19/2010
And so 'the dog' is introduced!

I loved the little moment between Lexxy and her mum (seeing as so far there aren't many)

I don't know whether to sympathise or dislike Rebecca... I guess time'll tell!

I knew almost right away that 'the dog' would have some kind of connection to 'the boy' in the first chapter!
SakurasApprentice chapter 3 . 9/19/2010
(again) Boo Alec!

I didn't really care for Maylanie (how would you pronounce that by the way) in this chapter to be honest because I was more interested in Lexxy (but I come to love her in later chapters)

But anyway this was a good chapter to introducing the people Lexxy daily interacts with!
SakurasApprentice chapter 2 . 9/19/2010
Lexxy's power is really interesting!

But I feel so sorry for her cause she was just five and I almost cried with her (that shows VERY good writing!)

Boo Alec! It kinda clicked early on that he was the little brat!

Also, I really liked the insight into how Rebecca used to be
SakurasApprentice chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Okay, I've actually read up to ch13 and thought...

This doesn't have enough reviews so hall with it I'm gonna review each chapter!

I've went on FictionPress a few times but nothing ever caught my eye... Something about this did and I actually made an account here just so I could review and put this on alerts!

This chapter definetly captured my interest, now that I'm in love with the characters I wonder what the frick is going on! But in a good 'I can't wait to read more' kinda way
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