I like it. Could you include more deescripitions of Alexis? I also thought Lexy was spelled with only one x but I suppose it really doesnt matter... Will you be updating soon?

This is a great story so far! I couldn't stop reading until I finished all the chapters (: Please update soon!

*phew!* 13 reviews!

This story deserved it IT'S REALLY GOOD!

It's also very addicting!

Levi was so cute in this chapter!

Also, you can tell how he's making Lexxy a happier person...

Maybe you should draw (or get someone else to draw) Levi with these 'earth' clothes or better yet get like a character design sheet for Levi and Lexxy

One last thing... purple eyes... aw!

Oh! Another thing! (sorry) I just thouhgt I should let you know that in alot of published books that I read lately I can't seem to care about the characters however, with this I actually care about them and wants to know what happens next. Before I realised it you made me fall in love with these characters - Congratulations!

This is such a sweet chapter that shows that Levi really cares about Lexxy's friendship and also that she cares :)

It was just one of those chapters that affects the heart

You have a talent for writing!

Also, I may check this other story out *wink*

Fell in love with Levi in this chapter!

He has such a great personaility :)

Also, I like how Lex sees him and Thief as different uh entities? You know, she didn't just accept it right off the bat. You did this really well!

I'm really glad you did a seperate chapter for thus - it adds to the tension!

Aw!

I have a feeling that Levi really grew to 'like' Lexxy as a dog!

And it's a little weird how Lexxy didn't get a little ticked at how her and Levi shared a bed (before she knew he was a shifter) and also I liked hearing about Maylanie's story

Loved how the whole 'magic' thing was explained so well!

I can already see Levi's awesome (ass) personaility! XD

Raliah is... I don't know...! At first I thought she was a you know... stereotype cheerleader or something but there is definetly brains behind the blonde!

Loved Thief trying to get the make-up away from Lex!

And *le gasp* Thief is human? Actually I kinda had that guessed BUT you did this VERY well!

*claps*

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH!

The racing and (screw it) Levi protecting Lexxy from that *insert swear word here* Alec!

This chapter was just so well done and brought the two so much closer!

Heheh 'Thief' when she called him that I thought his crime was stealing rather than *shuts up*

Love Maylanie and Lexxy's friendship in this chapter, I grew to like her a lot more in this chapter!

'The (quite lovable) dog' following her to and from school is a really nice touch!

I love the way you convay Lexxy's emotions so flawlessly through first-person

And yeah still not sure whether to like Rebecca or not (actually Rebecca is my mum's name XD but we care about each other alot more)

And so 'the dog' is introduced!

I loved the little moment between Lexxy and her mum (seeing as so far there aren't many)

I don't know whether to sympathise or dislike Rebecca... I guess time'll tell!

I knew almost right away that 'the dog' would have some kind of connection to 'the boy' in the first chapter!

(again) Boo Alec!

I didn't really care for Maylanie (how would you pronounce that by the way) in this chapter to be honest because I was more interested in Lexxy (but I come to love her in later chapters)

But anyway this was a good chapter to introducing the people Lexxy daily interacts with!

Lexxy's power is really interesting!

But I feel so sorry for her cause she was just five and I almost cried with her (that shows VERY good writing!)

Boo Alec! It kinda clicked early on that he was the little brat!

Also, I really liked the insight into how Rebecca used to be

Okay, I've actually read up to ch13 and thought...

This doesn't have enough reviews so hall with it I'm gonna review each chapter!

I've went on FictionPress a few times but nothing ever caught my eye... Something about this did and I actually made an account here just so I could review and put this on alerts!

This chapter definetly captured my interest, now that I'm in love with the characters I wonder what the frick is going on! But in a good 'I can't wait to read more' kinda way