Reviews for Open Arms
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
This poem is very simple but you convey your message and emotions very well. Good job.

Needa S chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Amen! Beautifully done. Write on and God Bless.
fears up side chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
so true
Tristan-the-Dreamer chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Got that right! A very sweet and true poem.

Saba Irfan chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
well..i wont say itz nice n i won say itz 's ok.i think it'll b nicer if u8 maka it rhyme.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
it's a little corny, but i do love god, so i like it.
Savella chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
That was pretty good! It almost reminded me of a song. Dunno which one, but it did. 2 things though. 1: Was the rhyming intentional? If it was, you'll need a bit more in there. If it wasn't, then sorry 'bout that! 2: This 'un's more of a nit-pick, but whatever. I think there is an extra line at the top of the page there. _

Yeah, that's it. I liked it. Geeze, I need to think of a different phrase to praise you with! I use this too much!
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
it's a little cliche, but i share the feeling. god is incredible! you should have seen how he moved through my church tonight. i want to write but it's like so late and i'm tired and ahh, it was incredible! anyways, good work.
Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Aw. it's sweet, and beautiful. Sounds like something that we would sing in church. I like it! Kudos. ~CD