Reviews for the crooked way is made straight
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Amen to your last paragraph! I remember you talking about that day, it really must have been amazing to see miracles of God.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Really interesting piece. I've never seen a piece like this at all. One thing that seemed odd to me was not capitalizing God and Jesus. Other than that your repetition worked well and your descriptions were interesting. Nicely done.
prettyauthor chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
this poem is so powerful i like the you showed the person being healed this is outstanding