Reviews for Just Act Natural
Child of the Creatures chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Wow...(I actually started luaghing when I read about the strip seach, I thought my mom was the only one how would do that...That's a good thing, by the way.)

I'm sorry, that's really all I can say...I really can relate to this...I think I'm gonna cry...

Anyway, this is a really great piece...
so i sing to the stars chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Omg, I am officially a horrible person - I definitely said I would review almost all of your stuff a little under a month ago. I'M SO SORRY I JUST COMPLETELY FORGOT. GAH. I NEVER REPLIED TO YOUR PM EITHER. -hits self over head- Haha, so...perhaps I'll actually review now. :P

This is pretty relatable. For a while I so badly wished I had never, ever told them. My mom was pretty good about it, but my dad said some things to me that made me feel even lower than I had before. And the lack of trust really hurts. So while I haven't been subject to "strip" searches, I know how you feel. And congrats on writing this so well! It contains a lot more emotion and...stuff than the majority of SI-related poems on here.
Rosie-bell chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
That's really deep.

I kind of really don't know how you feel.

Sort of.

I guess I do...

but not that deep into it.

Nice.
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
loved this...very...true. exactly what happened to me.

silent
CigaretteBurn chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I know exactly how you feel. I get interrogated by my parents all the time for stuff like this and a lot of other things. You depicted how we all feel in moments of weakness like this. Good job.
The Exuberant chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
good poem