I love the story. I hope you write more!

Okay, so I fell really behind on all of my stories that I follow here and am now just catching up. You're still doing a terrific job with this story and I just wanted to let you know. Your characters are real and relatable, and the plot has drawn me in. Keep it up!

Omigosh.

I loved that chapter. Although it was filled with drama and sadness, it was really well written and the anger of Ryan really shone through well. The whole affair concept? That knocked my socks off. Guess they were more family like then everyone else knew, huh?

One thing I would've thought to be HILARIOUS; if the movie had been Mighty Ducks. Get it? Like, Ducky and Mighty Ducks. HAH. I crack myself up.

Well, good chapter. Always awaiting the next update. :D

.:DeeDee:.

I love it! I really can't wait until I find out who gets Sadie. Evan, Ryan, or Vince?

Don't I just love those funny moments with Evan? I like how you went deeper into the whole scene when they first met and stuff.

So this story is so good and addicting that I've been reading it nonstop for the past couple of hours and it's so late into the night that it's actually early morning now...and I just kept praying that every time I pushed the arrow button to go to the next chapter that it would be the last one because I knew I wouldn't be able to go to sleep until I got caught up and actually didn't have more to read, but when I got to this last chapter and actually finished it, I was so disappointed that I didn't have more to read.

So that being said, I cannot wait to read the next chapter. And I think Sadie's kissing/Peter problem will be a welcome break from the intense drama of Ryan's reaction for a bit.

Update soon!

Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I've had exams I've had to study for.

This was a great chapter, and I absolutely loved the bantering beetween Evan and Sadie. I always enjoy that.

I think that Ryan definitely overreacted; he could have told her himself, but he didn't, and then he gets mad that Evan told Sadie, when he had the opportunity. I would think that he would know that Sadie would find out one way or another. Sometimes, he's really nice, but other times he makes me frustrated.

Your writing style is so amazing, lets not forget that. Very important, that.

Good luck with the next chapter!

This is a really good story and I can't wait for the rest of it. I just have three little nit-picky comments. In the chapter when Evan explains the thing between him and Ryan, your grammar kinda goes out the window spelling wise. I think you were getting a little too excited about the scene and typing too fast because several words are misspelled. I do that all the time, which is why I always reread everything four times. Two, when you describe what is written on the flyer for Antony and Cleopatra, a better word to use, instead of tryouts, would be Auditions. This is really nit-picky but if one is really in tune with the theater world, as Vince seems to be, I think that Auditions would be more professional. Again, just a suggestion. And three, after the call backs, when Vince says "A capella group booked this room for four thirty. The title of the type of group is "a cappella" as in singing without music. I think you meant to say An a capella group booked... Again, I'm nit-picky. Great story though. I'm really enjoying it.

-AJ

Ah. Wow didn't think he'd be that angry. Can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens about the Peter problem.

Ryan definitely overreacted so it will be interesting how she goes about confronting him further. Also be interesting to see how she talks to Vince.

JM

:D nice chappie!

lol, yup, this being made into a movie, top box office! we!

(random thought- i was reading the book 'teach me' and i am now so tired -plus exams tomorrow!-)

next update should be soon! lol, Ryan jealous of Evan for stealing Sadie away! ;)

love this story and the guy you thought up as Evan (in your profile pics, Hot! lol) yes girl moment.

No duh, Ryan likes Sadie. He needs to get a move on cuz Sadie is already liking Evan. Ryan's pride is keeping him from a lot of things, especially her.

that was great i still love the nickname ducky

Ah I'm as confused about all of this as Sadie is! lol, umm Evan, Evan, Evan...is so adorable! D Ryan..Blah, he is just being stubborn, he'll come around, I hope D, and Her friends...VERY good girl talk there, LOVED it! lol, I hope you update soon! ~Angela

Sadie, good plan, good plan. Hahahha. But really, I can't think of a better idea in her situations.

Lots of drama, that's for sure. (:

Hmm... Okay, so I know she isn't that... umm... experienced and such, and I know she's pining over Evan. But wouldn't on stage kissing be a, you know, good thing. Like, uhh... practice? Hahahha. Sorry, that just sounds awkward anyway I try to say that.

As for Ryan, I can't say I'm TOO surprised at his reaction. Sure, MAYBE it was a little over the top. But he always seems to have a short-fuse when it comes to Evan. And even though Sadie keeps think that it's HER so he shouldn't get so angry, but fact is, I think the girls are right; he's jealous and having her say that EVAN told her the story just made him angrier. Not to mention he probably doesn't believe that Evan told the story as unbiased as possible. Heck, I probably wouldn't either.

Lurvvily chappie, chickadee. (Hahhaha, chickadee... ducky... nevermind.) (: