Reviews for Forgotten Daughters
Koki Enwai chapter 4 . 8/15/2008
That was my favourite chapter so far. No concrit here.
Koki Enwai chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
You really piquied my interest here. The interaction between the sisters was believable, but they're all pregnant? O.o Interesting. . .

Keep up the good work!

- Koki
Shiro 21 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Curious to see how you're going to pull this off...

Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Oh, wow. I think I remember reading the original version of this. . . You've got quite a good thing going here. I like the touches you added that made it seem like the reader was right there in Puerto Rico. Very well done.

- Koki