Reviews for Goodnight
Aster Eris chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Wow. That's all I can say. Even though this poem is short, it's very powerful, and leaves no doubt as to the emotions you were trying to get across, which I've realized can sometimes be quite difficult. My favorite part is: Silly girl, no one hears/Silent tears. The rhyming is a really interesting technique that makes it seem cheerful and happy at first, but then there's this mocking tone that's really puissant (word of the day!). My only critique is that I think that line would make a better ending than what you have, although that's just my opinion. Great poem *long review* !

The Exuberant chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
good poem