|Reviews for My Pasta|
| Cake Love chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
You really don't have to rhyme, you know. :-P It's a really cute poem, just I feel like some of the lines struggle to rhyme (attributes/soup, pants/dance). Maybe rework it so that it doesn't rhyme and see how you like it? You'll have better control over what you actually want to say that way.
Then again, the rhymes do add a bit of whimsicality to it...maybe just make the rhymes better?
| jahefsdfds chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Love the second line, hon. Very cute.