This was SO good. Jesus the feels though! You're amazingly talented, keep writing please! :)

Yeahhh all guys really do act like that when they found they are in love with their bestfriend (girl) ehhhh thats kinda of irritating ...but yeah the story was amazing but I felt he forget Dannie's birthday ..the girl he love and also is bestfriend,,.how can he? That's pure disappointing

Hahaha this was hilarious! Loved it :)

Haha! Very sweet but amusing story! I loved it :-) Great job! :)

Cute! :D

man dis got be d cutest bestfriend love -dove one shot ;)

This story literally hurt my heart reading the start of it. But the end my sad tears turned happy

HARTING THIS SO MUCH TEEHEE

Ach. I love I love I love.

awesomest best-friend cliche

aww. i love this story! it's amazing. it's not like the other "best-friend-ditched-for-girlfriend plot" - i mean, it sort of is for the plot part, but yeah - because it's just really good. i love your characters so much! they're just so . . . down to earth :)

and i love how you put the .;;.

and yeah. i don't know what pwned is. thanks for saying what it meant at the end.

it's super cool. i love your writing style!

I Effing love this story! xD Ahaha, it is isanely lame to speak like that in person. But hey! Its Flipping fun! :) I perso ly do talk like this. And yes i hae been called immature. But! ...Um... Stuff. :

Okay well. I just really love your story. I can relate to it in the nerdy lame speech the characters use. I mean if a guy came up to me and said soemthing along the lines the i pwn him. Id probably fall in love. ;D

:) loove the story ! :)

it's so cute !

keep on writing !

AHAHA Effing pro story. :D

It reminded me of what a dork I used to be. I remember just a few months ago, I'd talk in gaming lingo ALL the time, so I told my best friend to bishslap me whenever I use it irl. It kinda helped. Bastard enjoyed it way too much.

Anyway, great story, and excellent choice of names. :P

LOL! That was awesome! It was hilarious, especially the end, and you did a really good job of mixing in the gaming lingo without making them sound stupid... Well... except for Jacey at the end. She did sound stupid, but I'm guessing that was intentional.

You know, I love the term 'roflcopter'. It cracks me up just saying it. I suppose that's kind of fitting, huh? And I know all to well what 'pwned' is. I have a friend that says, and types, it way to much.

Thanks so much for the laugh!

Liz