Reviews for I Don't Wanna
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
love properly... I'm guessing you mean love mentally/sprirtually, and not physically, based on the other 2 poems. things will get better eventually... everything always does...
J.N. Lloyd chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
This poem has a...very interesting style. I like the imagery a lot, but I had a difficult time trying to read it because the lines were sort of bunched up. But, if you're trying out a new style, I guess you could try to tweak it here and there. I liked the bolding in the poem, and I thought the message was very romantic! Keep writing!
SashaJade chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
take life as it comes and don't dwell on what you cant change. Loving someone is like being on a roller coaster, it never lasts as long as you wish it did, it's the highest and lowest you'll ever feel. But you can get back on whenever you want. one large machine made up of a million little memories. make more memories, the machine gets bigger and the ride better.