I love how self-aware you made Amy - that she acknowledged liking his bad boy persona more than the actual person and that they didn't really have any common interests (as far as she knew) to be compatible in a relationship anyways. She is right though - about the friendship part - even if they had noticed each other for weeks and then chatted a bit for two days, that's hardly friendship level. But how you wrote about her crush and how it steamrolled into this unmanageable ball of fluttering feelings every time she came into contact with Brent for longer periods of time - the evolution was realistic and pure adorableness.

cool one-shot. I quite liked it!

super awesum love it

This was so amazing

i bet ...

I can't believe both of them were placing bets. In a normal circumstance, one of the party member would have been offended finding out the other person bet on them and it was all a game. I am sure glad that this was not a normal circumstance. I really thought it was funny. I like how she was angry that she lost money. But in the end, this bet got them together in a much quicker manner than a much more natural way. I thought this story was really cute and it shows you how much courage one gets from a bet/dare kind of thing.

LOVED IT!

yay

Why IS he called Sketchy Brent? Is she calling him dumb?

Loved the plot..and all the betting.

-Im Just Mlssundaztood

Aw... how sweet. LOL

~Sarah

What a sweet lovely one-shot. It has the ingredients of a perfect romance.

a very well written piece,,keep up the good work...

hahhahaa thats funny

This was so great! It was truly amusing and amazing :D I wish it would continue though. I would love to see what happens to them further on :P Anyways, amazing story!

Nice! :)