Reviews for Your Best Bet
Yuniko chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
cute story and funny too :) keep up the good work
chapsticklips chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Bahaha, as a College fresher this year I can totally relate to this.. it's so easy to stalk and lust after randoms on campus. I really liked this one-shot though, in my opinion one-shots are far superior than 30 chaptered stories as they get a bit boring and dull to read half-way through it.. but yeah, the length was good, short and sweet.
insanity-ward chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
aww! so cute! really liked this one shot. too sweet xD
annoyance chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Love it
Loser701 chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
Good job! It made me smile while I was procrastinating on studying for my midterm tomorrow.

:)
blurrylights chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This was so much fun to read! I loved the plot, and the entire twist at the end killed me...I enjoyed it so much! You really did an awesome job. :)
Mithee chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
cute_

loved it~

i so enjoyed reading ti.
Maelys chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Quite funny!
Single White Rose chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
For some reason, I skipped the part where you explained that Sketchy Brent wasn't his real name, and I was just like, "who would name their child sketchy?" Haha, but I loved that you called him that! And I love this story.
misssweetsweet chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
What a sugary, sweet one-shot! I enjoyed it immensely!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Haha, fantastic story!

xx
Written chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
I love love love the way she calls him sketchy brent throughout the story. it seems SO MUCH like a code name my friends and I would give! that made it really realistic for me :) other than that, it was also very sweet. loved the way their relationship developed, and the way he turned out to be smart, for a slacker.

I especially enjoyed the ending, I would have to admit. it was so funny! I was thinking that maybe both of them had bets going, but I wasn't quite sure :)

anyway, well done. I'd say it's a good length for a oneshot. I mean, it's a bit long, but it works. I wouldn't split it up, but it's your call.

take care!
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
nice one-shot!
pinkfairyfloss chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
i love this story, too cute!

your writing is really good and i love how you can make the audience so attached to your characters with such few words

good oneshot
marii chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
LOL! too cute! Sketchy Brent!
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