Reviews for Your Best Bet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cute story and funny too :) keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bahaha, as a College fresher this year I can totally relate to this.. it's so easy to stalk and lust after randoms on campus. I really liked this one-shot though, in my opinion one-shots are far superior than 30 chaptered stories as they get a bit boring and dull to read half-way through it.. but yeah, the length was good, short and sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! so cute! really liked this one shot. too sweet xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! It made me smile while I was procrastinating on studying for my midterm tomorrow. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so much fun to read! I loved the plot, and the entire twist at the end killed me...I enjoyed it so much! You really did an awesome job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute_ loved it~ i so enjoyed reading ti. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason, I skipped the part where you explained that Sketchy Brent wasn't his real name, and I was just like, "who would name their child sketchy?" Haha, but I loved that you called him that! And I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sugary, sweet one-shot! I enjoyed it immensely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, fantastic story! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love love the way she calls him sketchy brent throughout the story. it seems SO MUCH like a code name my friends and I would give! that made it really realistic for me :) other than that, it was also very sweet. loved the way their relationship developed, and the way he turned out to be smart, for a slacker. I especially enjoyed the ending, I would have to admit. it was so funny! I was thinking that maybe both of them had bets going, but I wasn't quite sure :) anyway, well done. I'd say it's a good length for a oneshot. I mean, it's a bit long, but it works. I wouldn't split it up, but it's your call. take care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice one-shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story, too cute! your writing is really good and i love how you can make the audience so attached to your characters with such few words good oneshot |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! too cute! Sketchy Brent! |