Reviews for Completely Consumed
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Very nice. It's a sensual poem without being sleazy, and that's great. Great line break on the last line, too. Keep writing! :)
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
very good. I like how simple this is, yet how much it says. Good job :)