Reviews for Unnatural
Guest chapter 27 . 9/16/2016
See didn't even chose at the end did she? I think she's the PERFECT match for Max.
EnchantedUnicorn chapter 27 . 9/15/2014
Awesome story!
EnchantedUnicorn chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
I love how Caleb and Liam beat them up.
mydreamadventure chapter 27 . 8/20/2012
oh my fucking god this is a genius story you should get published cause id freaking by millions of these! and i really hope kiley and max get together i mean i like liam and all but he seems more like a friend than anything else haha. you have an amazing talent!
I-R-Marie chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I honestly want to know why you gave up on this wonderful spectacular series... there are some real shitty ass books out there. YOU could have made it big! you still can! I wish you could read this and consider finishing or publishing, cause let me tell you, I would deff. buy these books a million times over!
sydney420 chapter 27 . 2/23/2011
I came across this story as an accident, and I am so glad I did. It is amazing.. And amazing isn't a brilliant enough word to describe it. Let me try to sum it up: If it was a book, I'd buy ten million copies. :) It's beautifully written, and SO original. I wish I had the brains to think up something like this. I will definitely be looking into more of your work. And, I'll be immensely proud to say I got one of the first looks, (for free!) when your a zillionaire author on every tv show. This could be bigger than Harry Potter, and Twilight - no joke. If I was you, I'd seriously look into getting this series published. Thank you very much for a outstandingly wonderful read. Amen! :)
gothicgirl101 chapter 22 . 7/5/2010
TwentyTawnyTigers chapter 22 . 12/25/2009
I think that last bit is the best will/kiley momment so far. It is really sweet and it makes will seem more human. It also evoles their bond in a new way. I certainly did not see that coming:)
TwentyTawnyTigers chapter 21 . 12/25/2009
I love these flash backs, maybe even more than the actual present story. I started to tear up when Lisle died, even though I knew it was coming. Just to clear something up, the definition of purgatoy is eternal boredom, and I don't think that is exactly what you wanted to convey with this chapter. I should't really be saying anythin though, my spelling is worse than a second grader's. Anyways, I love what you are doing with this. If you were to get it profesionaly edited, you could ptobably publish it. I hope Kiley ends up with Max. I just like him better than Liam. But if Max where her mate, wouldn't she have realized it by now? Whatever, just thinking out load, keep up the good work and Merry Christamas!
Dead Deactivated chapter 27 . 7/15/2009
OH MY GOSH! There better be a sequel, I have to say this is one of my top 5 books ] SO FANTABOULOUS! I thought Kiley should end up with Max or Caleb... I dont really like Liam... I really like the flashbacks... and I TOTALLY LOVE WILL! Write the next book soon unless you already have! Keep writing cause you super great at it! THANKS for the STORY

t.elizabethrios chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
oh my goodness! This is my first time on fictionpress, first story I've actually gotten interested in. and I love it thus far. I've been a dedicated fanfiction reader and i lietally squealed when I found this story. Im so happy I found something to get into and spend all the time I dont really have on this(; All I've got to say, KEEP WRITING! You've got skill ;D okay, this is terribly long.


53BookTitles chapter 27 . 7/6/2009
AH! I love William! :)
I-R-Marie chapter 27 . 6/24/2009
This was THE best stories I've read, so far!I LOVED IT..

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I-R-Marie chapter 3 . 6/23/2009
That was frikkn funny. Loved it!
Ashley Simone chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
I can't believe you only got 45 reviews for this story. It is amazing. I can't wait to read more! I love the characters, especially Kiley and her coven.
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