Reviews for Random Thoughts
Jevanminx chapter 3 . 7/14/2008
Oh yay, she'll get to see the band in action now.

The bunny always dies first chapter 3 . 7/13/2008
I'm a girl and I still don't understand why we do that -change outfits when we DO look fine- well I guess I get it, but I don't think its neccesary and its really stupid. Anyway i actually did pronounce her name right, I heard it on this sho from England, in fact her name is one of the reasons I decided to read this story.

Awsome chappie. Update soon please.
WriterGurl123 chapter 3 . 7/13/2008
I have a feeling that Random Thoughts is Adam's band, but I can't wait to read what happens when she gets there.

Love it!
The bunny always dies first chapter 2 . 7/12/2008
Cool, update now now, now. And go.
Cereza M. xx chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
HMM! Interesting start.

I agree wholeheartedly with you; this story is flowing very nicely ]

However; a couple of things. Firstly; are you planning on putting some description on what Evangeline looks like anytime soon? It'd be nice to know what her hair was like; what her eye colour is... the like.

Secondly; 'awe' and 'aww' are two different things. You used 'awe' as in 'awesome' and in the sympathetic/sarcastic noise people make, in which case it is 'aww' not 'awe'.

Thirdly, just proofread everything - the first chappie was great; I don't remember any typos at all. But there were a couple in the second. Can't remember them off the top of my head, but I'm sure you get it.

Wow! This story is exciting. Love the house! Amethyst is growing on me too. Evangeline is a brilliant character. I love her name ] So gothic D

AAWW you're inspiring me to write my own story for ! But I dunno if I should... I'm not as committed as you... ' AWW darnit! What do you think... Should I attempt a story? LOL... I sound so pathetic '

Anyway! Update soon - I'd love to know what happens next!

This story has GREAT potential! ]

Love love!


Jevanminx chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
Oh, the shopping trip should be interesting. I use Daddy when I'm sucking up too, hehehehe.

WriterGurl123 chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
I have a feeling that Adam and Evangeline are going to hit it off right away or absolutely hate each other's guts which makes them attracted to each other. Either way, their going to fall hopelessly in love *insert dreamy sigh here* lol

Love it!
WriterGurl123 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Why do I feel like Amethyst is going to be living in the house behind or Adam's room is going to be the one right across from hers? I could be wrong, but it sounds like it.

I love it already. Can't wait to read the rest.
Jevanminx chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Hehehehehe, she does have a cool name, and it was a good introduction of all the main characters as well.

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