Reviews for Bloody Feet
Ja Reedus chapter 16 . 1/1/2009
There are a lot of mistakes, but I really like the plot and you've successfully gpt me hooked.

Update soon! ]
Giggling Bugs chapter 16 . 12/17/2008
oky i think this was awesome!.. hehe well i wish there was another chapter though. but i really liked how you made James lose himself. it made me kind of anxious to see what would happen. and you made his feelings seem so real i could almost imagin them *sigh* o how i wish someone did that to me.. hehe but still i want more! lol Update soon :D
babycowgirl009 chapter 16 . 12/17/2008
loved this chapter... im glad it was from his point of view
babycowgirl009 chapter 15 . 12/8/2008
I'm kind of sad that I caught up because your story was just getting so good. I'm really loving the story and all of the characters, Great job, can't wait for the next chapter
blurrylights chapter 15 . 12/1/2008
James is the killer genius! God Marissa...could you be any more stupid? :) Update soon!
masquerade-music-dancer chapter 15 . 12/1/2008
you are a wonderful writer!

i love how your words flow

:)

update soon! im looking forward to your next chapter...
Giggling Bugs chapter 15 . 11/30/2008
Oh my God, this book is so very very good. i cant even find the words to describe it. i cant wait to read on. i swear im gonna be dreaming of this at night LOL. Keep up the awesome Work! and hope u update soon, and i SWEAR i dont mind harassing you to get the update up ASAP :D
Serendipity Haze chapter 15 . 11/30/2008
Very nice! I feel like the characters are developing more, and I don't know. I like James when he isn't mean, I like the mysterious James. XD I also like how you put more passion on how you describe them dancing. Anyways, update soon please!

Haze
Toxic-Tears-123 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
OMG that was good. your really good at drawing the reader in at the start. and you are decriptive, thats really good. hey look up The Fox i posted it and its ok. its a adventure romance book chapter.
masquerade-music-dancer chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
im not done yet but this is a great storyy!
blurrylights chapter 14 . 11/24/2008
Interesting chapter...James is kind of opening up. I'm curious to see where this goes. Update soon!
Serendipity Haze chapter 14 . 11/24/2008
Good job! Though, to me James and Marissa aren't really developing as characters and are very static. Also, the were a lot more spelling errors in this chapter. But other than that well done, I must say I admire your diligence in posting new chapters. Update soon please!

Haze
Serendipity Haze chapter 13 . 11/7/2008
Very good, I like how James is becoming more 'dangerous' sexy. P I joke, buut not! Update soon please!

Haze
blurrylights chapter 13 . 11/6/2008
Very interesting...update soon!
blurrylights chapter 12 . 10/19/2008
I'm curious to see where this goes...can marissa break his facade? Anyway, udpate soon!
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