Reviews for Bloody Feet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There are a lot of mistakes, but I really like the plot and you've successfully gpt me hooked. Update soon! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() oky i think this was awesome!.. hehe well i wish there was another chapter though. but i really liked how you made James lose himself. it made me kind of anxious to see what would happen. and you made his feelings seem so real i could almost imagin them *sigh* o how i wish someone did that to me.. hehe but still i want more! lol Update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this chapter... im glad it was from his point of view |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kind of sad that I caught up because your story was just getting so good. I'm really loving the story and all of the characters, Great job, can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() James is the killer genius! God Marissa...could you be any more stupid? :) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are a wonderful writer! i love how your words flow :) update soon! im looking forward to your next chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, this book is so very very good. i cant even find the words to describe it. i cant wait to read on. i swear im gonna be dreaming of this at night LOL. Keep up the awesome Work! and hope u update soon, and i SWEAR i dont mind harassing you to get the update up ASAP :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! I feel like the characters are developing more, and I don't know. I like James when he isn't mean, I like the mysterious James. XD I also like how you put more passion on how you describe them dancing. Anyways, update soon please! Haze |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that was good. your really good at drawing the reader in at the start. and you are decriptive, thats really good. hey look up The Fox i posted it and its ok. its a adventure romance book chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im not done yet but this is a great storyy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter...James is kind of opening up. I'm curious to see where this goes. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! Though, to me James and Marissa aren't really developing as characters and are very static. Also, the were a lot more spelling errors in this chapter. But other than that well done, I must say I admire your diligence in posting new chapters. Update soon please! Haze |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good, I like how James is becoming more 'dangerous' sexy. P I joke, buut not! Update soon please! Haze |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting...update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious to see where this goes...can marissa break his facade? Anyway, udpate soon! |