Reviews for let's pencil in our hearts
The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
This is really great! I love the idea behind the poem, and the use of parenthesis was cool because it was as if the phrase inside was being "covered up" with them.

~Daughter of the Faeries
SeaBird13 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
good poem, i like it
WhatAboutDolly chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
I love the message in this poem, and the title it just caught my eye.