Reviews for let's pencil in our hearts
The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
This is really great! I love the idea behind the poem, and the use of parenthesis was cool because it was as if the phrase inside was being "covered up" with them.

Daughter of the Faeries
SeaBird13 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
good poem, i like it
WhatAboutDolly chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
I love the message in this poem, and the title it just caught my eye.