That was quite fabulous. I'm enjoying your characters although Cale's personality is a bit murky and Violet almost seems to be there only for the purpose of progressing the plot. Might wanna tweak her appearance in the story a bit.

Secondly, I'm quite positive that not eating meat for (I'm assuming here that Cale is 14-17) for about 10-13 years doesn't mean you'll throw your guts out when you finally do eat meat 10-13 years later. Just, you know, pointing that out. Find a better reason. Maybe Violet just made him eat something dreadful that she had cooked. Icky cooking can make you sick or throw up and it seems more realistic.

However, I do enjoy the whole idea of how they meet. Very original and your writing isn't half bad either. I would suggest toning down the semi-colon abuse since, you know, one isn't needed everywhere you stuck one. And this:

“Actually, the point was kind of that you’re not.” Drew couldn’t resist pointing out, and grinned at the look he received.

is a no-no. Drew stated in what he said that he was making a point, you don't need to restate it in the narrative. That's just repetitive which is in turn annoying.

I await the next chapter. :) (I was totally sad when I reached the end of this 'cause I thought there was more than one chapter and then there wasn't. Update~)

Okay, when the story ended I quite literally said, "Aw..." without realizing I was doing it. XD Cute story. The ending was hilarious.

This is so cute! I really love Drew he seems like a cool character. I hope for a sequel or something. Please *Puppy Eyes*

haha, cute. ] sorry it's short!

This is so cute! I love it~ You should totally update this!

Update Soon!

Cari Marie

I wanted to read a nice, cute and funny story before sleeping so I re-read that one and I still like it a lot (as great impression as the first one), so I re-review!

Thanks again for sharing Cale and Drew with us!

Very funny, very cute. And I agree with Drew . . . drinking water after I barf just makes me do it all over again.

Livi

This was really funny, and well written. I liked it very much. :)

Is there actually any possible response to this other than "Aw!"?

Very cute and well characterised for a short piece like this.

It's been a while since I read such a god story that made me laugh out loud. I was almost crying at the end (although it might be the sugar high, but I doubt it!) I really like the characters, in such a short span you make them likable and interesting. Great job. I would love to see more of about these two! The humor was jsut so good! _

Ici

Oh, so cute! However, I must question, "Are high schoolers usually that suave?" Drew's really confident for a high school kid.

D'aw, I have this mental image of the Black Dragon and his small human after reading your description of Drew and Cale, even though the personalities are completely different. XD

This is absolutely freaking FANTASTIC!

I LOVE IT!

It's adorable and I think it deserves a sequel where Drew meets up with Cale on Thursday~

FANTASTICALLY MARVELOUS.

o. fun new story! i kind of like the title, but i can understand if you're not crazy about it- sometimes it's hard to find the right one. i'm definitely intrigued by this. cale sounds adorable and shy [i sympathize with anyone who blushes that much] and drew sounds sweet and smokin' hot [i have a thing for dreads], so i'm looking forward to more! :)

That was simple, kind of cute (despite the throwing up ~_), original and quite the giggling material (easy to imagine too). Thanks for sharing it!

I'm happy to read more of your work and do want to see more of IABD but as long as you'll finish it one day, I don't mind the wait (can always reread it when "en manque").

Dreads!

Also: Cuteness! Cale is really lucky.