that is so cute!

I read this, scrolled up and immediately re-read it. ;

To further clarify-I thought the story was very good. You managed to give all three people defined personalties in a short amount of time and the description you worked in, well, I can pretty clearly picture Drew, working on Cale XD Fialogue was fun and funny and I loved the sarcasm (I'm a wit fan and you had quite a bit in here. Favorite lines would definitely be Voilet's, "..the part where I thought you were exaggerating" and Drew's, "Yeah, they sort of like it when the VP shows up").

All in all, great story. A good thing to come back with, I think! I noticed you put it down as complete, so I'm not going to ask for continuation; it had a great complete feel for teh one shot that it was. Wouldn't mind seeing another slice of their lives later on though, if you ever felt like it. D Thanks a lot for sharing.

(For titles, uh...all I can think of is "I found him in the-" but that...that might be too lame for you.)

Great start!

Title's not so bad. Actually, I think it's kind of good. I mean, you could have named it 'Bathroom Boyfriend' or something worse. Maybe 'Boyfriend Jamboree' so the initials would be BJ (which I hear is another name for the bathroom?). 'Lou Love'. "I Love Lou".

Maybe I should just stop there, because I can only see it going downhill from there.

I'm looking forward to more of this story, and more of your other stories, keep up the great work,

Qui