Reviews for A Little Bird
LionessNinja chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
wow, this sounds like a great example of what a person with disabilities might feel like
Landcaster chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
A couple things I noticed. The somewhat sing-song quality and the use of birds as figures for quite a distressing topic struck me as quite interesting. Not sure if you did it on purpose, but it was quite apt. Also, the way you tied it up at the end with the final stanza had very good organization; it made me remember it much better, like a good song. Finally, the message itself: I felt bad for the bird, just like someone who is a little different or lost or afflicted or ill-used. Good work