This story is making my head hurt - stoping reading now.

Well, this story was bad. There was no specific plot, and the grammar was horrid. I have no idea why I wasted my time reading it.

I had pandora on, and "Jeanette" by Chase Coy started playing while I was reading it, and it was so perfect... Great chapter.

I'MA BE HONEST, YOU GOT LAZY, THAT HAS TO BE IT. BUT OTHER THAN THE PENULTIMATE AND LAST CHAPTER, I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THIS STORY.

I loved this story so mouch

Te only thing i would have loved to read it his father's trial and how did he made his mind to do it.

I also read stupid post it notes(Im still waiing for the last chapter T_T), I did find small things in common but the stories are totally different.

Sorry for the bad english.

Good work :D

so I really liked your story, and like I promised i'll be reading version 2... I'll probably like that version too, just cuz this genre is pretty much my forte of reading

Love Natsuki Lee

:P I found you!

You blaspheme! The Queen of the Damned movie is not to be trusted! Over half of that never happened! Magnus created Lestat, girl w/ violin was a guy who he lived w/ in Paris before he was turned, both him and Marius are blond, he never falls in love w/ Jesse, and they ignored the existence of half the characters!

Read The Vampire Lestat and Queen of the Damned! grr.

Sorry for that rant. That just kinda hit a nerve. .

Oh, and good story!

I love gravitation! I was Yuki for halloween once, and I had my own Shuichi, which was my bestie, but whatever

You have a few errors but I like this story

awesome story! I felt bad all the time I read because you ask for reviews in each chapter...but I had to read on, so I didn't review. forgive me! I'll write an extra long review instead. If you don't mind ;)

Well, first of all, I like the way Adrian turns out. It took me abou half the story to figure out he's emo, which is defenitely a good thing because I hate stories where the first sentence is "I'm pale, have freckles and blond hair with black lowlights, and I'm emo. deal with it! Xx" He's also not that typical BAWL-my-Daddy-raped-me-kid. He's believable. And the chaos inside his head is just cute. Then, Kian is great. It took me nearly the whole story to realize he's not sun-tanned, but dark-skinned. At first I thought he was one of those sexy pale guys with dark hair and stunning eyes. Honestly, I still think he is. But anyway, I'm rambling. His character is nice, in all his unfriendlyness and all. I liked him from the beginning. yeah well, so your characters (all of them) are great. I like your writing style, it's cnfusing at first, but when one's gotten into it, it fits perfectly to the story. Amazing story, really! and I adore the ending! *cuddles happy ending* yay! cookies for you. hm I hope the review's not too long'

This was really good. Your characters aren't lame, they actually seem real. Adrian's thought process in extremely cool because that's usually how 'normal' people think. I have read Stupid Post It Notes, and it was good. I think any of Dirty Angel Toes' story will inspire, they're all magnificantly written. Kian was a great charater. I loved how you made the characters change gradually, not all at once. My favorite chapter was 23, The World Needs To Know. I loved it. It was beautiful and so true. You captured Adrian's emotions and thoughts perfectly.

Tonic Rose

Haha, Adrian is an interesting kid. Saying things out loud and such. I found though, that this chapter was a bit messy. His thoughts felt muddled but not in the properly written way. You should work on that. Other than that, good chapter. Kian seems like a creepy kid, the way he has power over everyone like that.

I'm sure you're wondering, "Why is this idiot putting this story on alert when it is clearly finished." Basically, it's to make it easy for me to find so I can finish reading it when I have time. I realize I could go back into my review history and find it, but I'm too lazy to do that.

On to what I though of the chapter though. The main character makes me laugh. His thought process is great. Not being able to stand hearing swear words would be very problamatic. Hopefully green eyes doesn't use this to his advantage too much.

I'll get around to reading this and reviewing some of the other chapters latter. So far, this story is very good. I'd be reading more right now if I wasn't having family obligations at the moment.

Good story!

At the beginning I kind of wanted to stop reading because of the spelling/grammar mistakes and character inconsistencies, but by the end it was worth it.

I'm kind of thrown by this last chapter, because it all of a sudden takes Erik from not-too-important to has-his-own-chapter.