nice story but i need chapter two .

I've been reading this story, and it took me only 2 days to finish it, since I'm so in love with it! Awesome, and super cute! Kinda corny towards the end, but what the heck, I love corn. :D

Keep writing, you're awesome!

~HRPK

I am an avid reader of your stories and I read them often (I'm one of those weird people who reread things), and I've noticed a pattern in your stories.

A lot of your characters have less than perfect parental relations. For instance Aubrey from that story that's name escapes me, feels guilty for standing up to her mother, despite the fact that her mother treats her like trash. I mean, some could construe it as borderline abuse.

And then Dylan feels guilty for not comforting her father, despite the fact that he just got a much younger woman pregnant. I'm not saying people don't do that, but, I dunno, it bugs me.

And her mum's reaction really bugs me. If I was a mother, I would not let her go without knowing what was going on. And I'd be much more angry than she seems to be. Dylan is old enough to understand the feelings her mother is going through and accept that they have nothing to do with how she feels about her father.

I dunno, maybe it's just me, but sometimes those relatonships seem too dismissive, none of them really doing anything about their feelings.

Just thought I would give my input and I really hope it hasn't offended you in anyway because I really didn't intend it that way.

Brenna

i absolutely love this...:)

you laid the insecurities on a bit thick in some areas but otherwise i thought it was quite good- but why did she let hannah get away with that?

charlotte

i LOVE it! i really really LOVE it! :D :D :D

love it!

You know when you get really into a book and when it’s over get all sad. And you keep reading it over and over again, because you get so attached to the characters. Well this book did that for me. It was a really good story. I even liked it better then the Rock star series. (No offence) I write a lot and this book diffidently intimated me. I’m scared to write now because compared to yours, mine looks like crap. Ha-ha. Anywho, I really would like a sequel to this. I’ve even thought of sequel ideas in my head. Probably nothing good to anything you could come up with, just brainstorms. I really hope you reply to this, because if not I wrote this for nothing. Ha-ha.

Absolutely Adorable!

"The thought smacked me harder than a camper swatting a mosquito"

"smacking her on the nose like a naughty puppy"

"arms shaking like my little sapling in a hurricane"

"I didn’t care if they were divorced, married or international penpals at the moment. I just wanted them here, by my side."

Just a few of the lines that made me laugh out loud!

I'm glad I read this again.

Aww that was great. I just wish that you had tied the thing with Hannah up better. She should have gotten in trouble for what she did. And you would think that Dylan would tell people about that. Maybe she did and i just missed it, after all it is 4 am. Oh well. I like the story. Good job!

gaah i hate how amazing you are at writing.. its 2 am rite now.. and i still have to study for exams.. hate physics

i coudnt stop READING THIS!

i blame it on your skills. hehe

i bet im ganna regret this in a couple of hours.. eh o well.

aww... this was a cute one!

Another great story from you! I'm starting to feel like I'm going home with these stories - Indiana/Chicago - it's so familiar now because of all your other stories (I'm from teh East Coast).

Look forward to more.

When I first got the email in my inbox about this story, it didn't click between RockFan and the Phone Calls and all. But now that I'm up to date on RJ's story, I meant to go back and reread the whole series from the beginning when I found a little gem I hadn't remembered.

And now I'm glad I read it. The summary first discouraged me from reading, but now that I have, I know how great a story it was. Dylan was fun, if a little boring. Her crush on Zac wasn't really addressed after that one date, but I guess she just wasn't star-struck anymore. It was a good story, though. I liked it. Even though Phone Calls is still better... lol