Reviews for Whore
From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Dear stained blue,

Artists dont need to explain their work. That's why their artists
From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Dear Stained Blue,
From The Stone Bridge chapter 2 . 9/20/2008
It is what is what it is and it deserves itself.
Mourning Sickness chapter 2 . 7/16/2008
"your essence on my teeth, like grinding cigarettes into an ash tray."

One of the most poetic lines I've read in a while. Nice work.
Scarlett Wynter chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
good. but I don't think it's about the illusion of darkness as much as it is about the taste of regurgitated love
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
this really captured my interest. It's well done and your imagery is great.

the only thing is that I don't share the same opinion about "silence" as you do. I find silence to be basically the exact opposite of most of what you described. but that's just me. lol.

yeah. anyway, excellent job on this.
Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
I liked it, but it wasn't your best work. Still good though.

McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Beautiful-somewhat...completely! Deadly conversations-silhouette of your mother, emptiness-lingering sister of darkness-some of my favorite lines-but every line is staggering. I love it and will read it again and again!

Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I like it. Keep it up :)

trying chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
The description you used in this is beautiful. You really have a way with words.