Reviews for Move Along
jamie chapter 15 . 12/7/2016
thanks for writing this! i thoroughly enjoyed it :)
Zarica Vicen chapter 7 . 12/23/2014
alliecat55 chapter 15 . 11/25/2014
I realy injoyed reading this story
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
I think this story was great! You should think about a sequel about Annie and Jamie's story some years after Move Along, perhaps he could come back from the Army for Jack and Mac's wedding (wink, wink) haha just an idea. Or you could write Ben's love story (I loved Ben).
Keep writing!
J chapter 15 . 5/25/2012
great story despite the predictable storyline :) i think you've managed to make the characters come alive through your style of writing :) keep it up!
KoriNeko18 chapter 15 . 9/29/2011
Cute story! I liked it lots. The only thing was that it felt a little too fast. I don't know why, just felt like everything was a bit rushed. Anyway, I did love this story!
MADdreamers chapter 15 . 4/3/2011
This was really nicely written. It was a great length for a story, not too long or too short. I really liked the main characters, and I felt bad for Ben since he didn't end up with anyone job!
asiaalicexx chapter 15 . 1/22/2011
your story was amazing! i loved all the characters(except Logan lol)they were developed beautifully and very easy to relate too
carefreewannabe chapter 15 . 11/7/2010
Omg, omg, omg! I loved it a lot! It was really well written. I cried a couple of times because it was really really touching. You did a great job! ;D
Beartrap chapter 15 . 10/24/2010
Enjoyed the story, but I hope that's not really your outlook on the Army. My baby brother is 11x Infantry in a replacement unit. He's the guy on the front lines that goes in when someone else is wounded or killed. I can't imagine being anything but fully supportive of him and the rest of the soldiers. They're who stand between my freedom and anyone that wants to take it from me.

Anywho. Very cute story. I really liked reading it.
Pain1415 chapter 15 . 6/29/2010
i LOVED the story. At the begining i thought it was a little werid but as it went on i changed my mind good jod
jaliwo chapter 15 . 6/6/2010
I wasn't too sure about this story the first time I read the first chapter. But I came back to it a few weeks later and gave it a second chance, and I'm glad I did. It seems in most stories I read on fictionpress the guy "saves" the girl, and in this story it was the reverse and realistic. Very refreshing.
LanternLight13 chapter 15 . 4/30/2010
Lovely story. The characyers were written really well. Thankyou for sharing.
Realwriterslie chapter 15 . 11/24/2009
Love, Love, Love the story you did an amazing job writing it
THeUNNamED chapter 15 . 8/17/2009
Aw what a sweet story! I LOVED IT!
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