I think this was a really great story...up until Chris punched her in the nose and no one did anything. I don't care how much she said she deserved it, I doubt Jared wouldn't have hit him or that Dale wouldn't have done more. That part just seems unrealistic. I think there also should have been more dialogue between them at the end about what Zack said to Jared, how he saw her run out, etc. It just seemed a little too rushed.

Good job, though! (:

Kinda knew Lauren and Zack would end up together (for real, not for show) when he was first introduced. Cute story! I definitely laughed-out-loud when I read about Chris acting like a lost puppy. Ha ha, he'd be so cute if he wasn't so hot!

Sweet and simple, just the way I like it.

Love the story and well done.

I'm going to favourite this : )

Loved it! Great job!

that was cute. i was for zack/lauren from the start, jarred just seemed like an airhead to me for some reason? D

i think ur summary wa reli reli good but i didnt like the story very much. sorry!

great little short story.

i loved it. ]

it was super cute. zack is a total sweetheart. :)

Dear MadForFigs,

I really like the way you write. I've read a few of your stories and they're all really good. Yes, even the fluff. SO, um, that's pretty much it, yeah.

Great story, though short, but so worth it! :D

I just have to say before I start to read, I adore the summary. Kudos.

*Will read now, Ciao.

Wow that was really really good!

I understand why you're dissapointed with the last chapter, but you honestly shouldn't be too worried about it. It ended just like I wanted it too...

Looking forward to your Chris-Dale story.

Oh and just a random fact (you probably don't want to know), I love the names you've given to the male leads in the story (namely Zack, Chris and Brett)..

This was amazing! I really liked it. :)

It was fluffy and entertaining. Pretty much how I like my stories, so good job! I do have one question though... Who's five?

Well, congratulations on two things: for completing such a wonderful story and for getting accepted into NYU! Of course, do be careful; it's expensive here in New York and soon you will be sucked dry of your money. I'm still only in high school, but my parents have made sure that I learn the value of a dollar. Moving on; I immediately fell in love with Damage Control. I got the ending I wanted and much more! You grammar was precise and flowed beautifully! And needless to say, Zack was my absolute favorite character. He was so selfless...I truly do admire that quality in people! Once again, congrats and best wishes in college!