Reviews for Damage Control
SierralaineWalsh chapter 6 . 4/10/2009
Love it. Love it. I LOVE IT! Haha. I really do. It's short... but I still love it. Glad they got together in the end, that was what I was hoping for after reading the summary.. number 1 and 4. Haha. Incredibly sweet! Looking forward for your updates.. :)
BlueDolphinz chapter 6 . 4/9/2009
Wow, this was good. complicated, but good. i loved the summary, lol. nice job.
Cupid's Jinx chapter 6 . 4/8/2009
Oh my gosh! I actually absolutely ADORED this! -squeals in delight-

Ah, I've been reading too many Point Horrors lately. It was awesome to get a romcom in, bloody awesome.

Have you ever considered compiling a few of these shorties together and sending them off the a publisist? Because I would, without a doubt, buy the book (or, ya know, books). I'm 73 per cent sure that I've read at least on other piece written by you...I remember your unique starting of every chapter.

But, seriously, I think you should send some of them off!


Jestry chapter 6 . 4/7/2009

Holy cow, you have no idea what a fangirl spazzy fit I threw when I saw that this story updated.
sweet vanilla mint chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
Awesome, AWESOME story! :D I love it. Thank you for posting!
GraceElaganceandBeauty chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
the whole story was awesome, every single chapter . thanks for such a wonderful story
princess.charlotte chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
great story! it was fun to read and lauren and zack really had great chemistry together. also congrats on NYU (i'm a senior too so i know how stressful those decisions are) and can i just make the random comment that i really like your plot summary...

sweet vanilla mint chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
I just finished reading this chapter... I'm practically hooked! :) I'll continue on now.
softrequiem chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
AHH, sorry for double-reviewing, but Fictionpress cut off my review. The rest of it was supposed to say:

I am highly anticipating Chris & Dale's story.. both are interesting characters (a guy punching a girl isn't something you read about everyday :P) and I just know their story will be cute :]

Please update soon!
softrequiem chapter 6 . 4/6/2009
WHOO~ Congrats on getting accepted to NYU! :D Those five AP classes paid off then, I'm guessing? (: Sorry to hear about those rejections, but maybe it just wasn't meant to be. NYU sounds awesome anyway! :D

I'm glad you were able to finish Damage Control, though I'm a little sad that it's over now. Lauren and Zack are so sweet!
daydee chapter 5 . 2/28/2009
love the summary.

you have a great way with words.

please continue this on whenever you feel like it.

obviously not 10 years from now, preferably in the near future.

but continue like father, like son.

tht would be awesome!


hyagbandgrl chapter 5 . 1/24/2009
I need more Damage Control! This is like the story of my life. However, my love drama was far less dramatic considering it started in middle school and ended midway through high school. But that story didn't have a happy ending. Please finish this story!
sherbetsi chapter 5 . 1/20/2009
ah where's the last chapter?

are you dead?


sian x

ps great story by the way. i love your work. XD
chocolatechipash chapter 5 . 1/1/2009
wow great job on this story so far, i hope its not too late, i love zach! what a muffin.
michelle chapter 5 . 12/28/2008
hi! please update soon! i really love this story (:
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