Reviews for Damage Control
gulistala chapter 2 . 8/4/2008
Uhm...okay. I think Zack liked her a tinsy bit but was trying to direct her in Jarred's way. I think that's still the case but the two are going to fall head first for each other and Jarred is going to be forgotten. Well, romantically anyway. This is my theory. Let's see how this fic turns out! D

softrequiem chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
lauren's been annoying me, but i'm glad she finally sees what her plan's consequences may be. zack is a sweetie, but i think he actually likes her since he really seems to care he kissed her even when people weren't watching. compared to zack, jarred doesn't seem that great anymore.. but i still wonder who lauren'll end up with. great chapter & i hope you update soon!~
awaiting.rain chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
i like zack and lauren together, but then i think about jarred, and i'm not so sure anymore.

and then there's dale...
TuneOut chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
This is a good story so far. I like the characters in your story. You flesh them out well.
Aqua Revolver chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
I love the summary... very short and sweet, that's what made me want to read it.

Chapter 1 & 2 got me totally hooked and I can't wait for the next chapters

Good work!
SecretsUntold chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
Nice summary :)

I know who one-four are but who's five? Dale?

anyways... it's a good story so far

Zack is so cute

can't wait for the next chapter

the littlest sakura chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
this is great! update soon, k? ur summary was confusing but intriguing when i first read it, but now i think i get it. but who's five?
superficialSagacity chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
I just love a good ol' cliched fluff story.

:D How long is it going to be?
Haylieboo chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I love Super Smash for N64!

Greatest thing eva!

And also, I like the story. The summary fits it really well :]
softrequiem chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
ooh i'm liking this very much (: great job! please update soon~
fractured sky blue chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
i thought i had left a review on this one before. Must have forgotten. i liked this story, love zack's character for some reason. It was a nice read. well done.

mariakay chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Asian Dream Team, haha that was great! I loved the intro and it was well written. So continue the story, I always loved the getting him jealous plots.
x.betweenthelines chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Love it already!

The summary is great - One likes two. Two is going out with three, but actually likes one. Then one pulls four into the picture by making four help one make two jealous. Sound simple? Ask five.

Good work. )
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