Reviews for Crimson Moonlight
VampireLover7 chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
that story has some bite...it is really good..i hope you write more, i want to know what happens to her after she pressed her blood covered hand to his lips...OH! SO GOOD! does she died or become one of his kind...dum dum dum...keep up the great writing
Mello.y.Muse chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I'm intrigued. Love the Twilight mention, by the way. Update soon, please.
S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Intense! This is a good way to get the reader interested in the rest of the piece. Well done.
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
Awesome, update soon.
OnyxDrake chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Oh, dear, that is rather like playing with fire, holding up a bloodied wrist to a vampire.

Just a note on this following section, which seemed clumsy to me:

He walked towards me, his feet making a clacking sound on the hard floor. We were now inches apart, him staring down at me.

My suggestion:

He walked towards me, his shoes clacking on the hard floor, until we were inches apart, with him staring down at me.