|Reviews for Everything I Never Wanted|
| slcjnk2008 chapter 16 . 6/26
This was a terrific chapter and I was so happy to see Tristan and Jessica again. But it's not looking good for Damien is it? But it's looking up for Casey isn't it, what an unexpected twist you have left us with.
Absolutely wonderful chapter.
| Writerandreader chapter 16 . 6/23
It must have been a while since you've updated because I can't remember Adrian AT ALL. I'll have to go reread the chapters I guess. Good update! Made me laugh a lot. I'm SO glad you brought Tristan back because damn I love him.
| slcjnk2008 chapter 15 . 3/17
Hi Sarah, well I have finally caught up to the latest chapter and I have to say that you are definitely the "QUEEN of Cliffhangers" and that I love this story. As Dolly Parton says, "if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain". So thanks again for sharing your stories with us. - Shelley
| slcjnk2008 chapter 3 . 3/16
Hi Sarah, I just started this story and so far I like the way you are developing the plot and its characters. And on a personal note: I find it very barbaric against women both human and vampire and think it's time for the king to establish some laws on civility and order for the six billion people living on the planet. (So please bring out the guillotine and kill off all the sicko-sadistic vampires that abuse, mistreat and rape their blood supply). And now that I have vented, I'm onto the next chapter so I can find out what's going to happen to Casey. So thanks again for being such a great creative writer and always giving your readers such wonderful stories even with your limited time. - Shelley
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/16/2015
| ladyluvme17 chapter 12 . 5/6/2015
Omg it ends just when it was getting good! More More More!
| Haydron chapter 2 . 4/16/2015
There are a lot of commas being missed before ending speech marks. A minor thing really, but repeated enough, and I notice it. Also sometimes, a period is applied, and the next sentence doesn't begin with a capital letter.
Sorry this review was short, but I will keep reading! :D
| Haydron chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
Your attention to detail is impressive. I was keeping a tally in my head. 2010...right. Born in 1993...right. Sixteen...okay. Few months to go till her 17th. I quickly surmised the only possible timeline this story could take place is, if it was set in January 2010. And lo and behold - mid-week January was mentioned! :D
I really enjoyed this first chapter.
Vampires have always taken a backseat to my preference for werewolves, but if I sit down and think about it, I've read a lot of vampire-related books and watched a lot of vampire-related media.
Luke was so rough, and Jerrick was an interesting mix of soft and rough. I'm trying to flesh out the female lead in my brain. She's "docile" but I have a feeling she's really smart and likes plotting. Otherwise I'd be disappointed :P
Interested in meeting Damien!
You've gone all "The Omen" on me :D
| ButterballPorkbun chapter 12 . 4/9/2015
That is so sad is he going to send Daniel away or something like that away this story is wonderful please keep updating.
| lala chapter 11 . 1/18/2015
Great story. Just a few things though, I know are, our, and or all sound alike but they are completely different words. I saw that a few times in your writing, with more than just those words. You should really either start editing, edit better, or ask someone to edit. Keep up the plot though
| Ellen chapter 11 . 1/17/2015
I like Adrian best so far. It was obvious to me that Alexandra would be Damian's love interest, but I'm not sure what's Adrian's deal is. My current guess is that Alexandra died tragically, Casey is her reincarnation and is now regaining memories of her old life, and Adrian wants to take a mad grab for power (maybe even mutinying master and becoming master himself?). I'm worried about Casey learning her song in time, but more worried about the development with her being a reincarnation of Alexandra and how both she and Damien will handle it.
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
Had to re-read this story . Just as enjoyable the second time around.
| Primi chapter 6 . 2/20/2014
| Primi chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
| ButterballPorkbun chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
Please update I absolutely love this story I really really want to now what happens next. I love your dark stories so please update