Reviews for Everything I Never Wanted
lala chapter 11 . 1/18
Great story. Just a few things though, I know are, our, and or all sound alike but they are completely different words. I saw that a few times in your writing, with more than just those words. You should really either start editing, edit better, or ask someone to edit. Keep up the plot though
Ellen chapter 11 . 1/17
I like Adrian best so far. It was obvious to me that Alexandra would be Damian's love interest, but I'm not sure what's Adrian's deal is. My current guess is that Alexandra died tragically, Casey is her reincarnation and is now regaining memories of her old life, and Adrian wants to take a mad grab for power (maybe even mutinying master and becoming master himself?). I'm worried about Casey learning her song in time, but more worried about the development with her being a reincarnation of Alexandra and how both she and Damien will handle it.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
Had to re-read this story . Just as enjoyable the second time around.
Primi chapter 6 . 2/20/2014
nice chapter
Primi chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
nice..,
ButterballPorkbun chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
Please update I absolutely love this story I really really want to now what happens next. I love your dark stories so please update
Alaeryel chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
BRILLIANT-PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE SAY THERE WILL BE MORE!
Alaeryel chapter 5 . 1/12/2013
LOVING IT!
scorpioprincess chapter 9 . 10/16/2012
I really like this :) please update soon
Tammy Rae chapter 9 . 8/3/2012
I really like this story. There is a lot of intrigue and the suspense keeps me reading. I'm very much looking forward to the next few chapters.
a girl chapter 9 . 7/18/2012
This story has gotten better and better from the moment I started. I looked at the list of books you are currently writing and I feel this one should be a priority because I would love to see what happens next.
E. N. Chance chapter 9 . 6/19/2012
It's official I love Adrian! We'll see in later chapters if Damian straightens up. I'm very curious as to how this dinner will go since the "slaves" compete XD
Latinoprincess chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
Yay! I like this story! I am truly sorry but I don't have any feedback. :( But it's awesome so far!
little1rach chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
Hey, i just wanted to say that i love the story so far and was wondering if you were going to be finishing the story?
KaylahDemi chapter 9 . 3/19/2012
Great so far! I'm definitely adding it to my Alert list!
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