I feel like suck an idiot for not having re-read your story sooner. But I know which story this is (And It has nothing to do with you, It's me, I forget some things until I re-read them) and I love how you added this in, it's wonderful, and I want you to post more.

Hey your story is extremely good, much better than the original, I must say. Keep up the good work! ;) You were right to re-write it.

Bella

Well This is a pretty good start of the rewrite version

I cant wait for the next chapter

i love it. write more very soon please!

Very nice intro. I liked it a lot. No need to explain your thought process, we can all handle curiosity I'm sure. And anyone who read the original knows she had issues with other vampires and her soon!