Reviews for Everything I Never Wanted |
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![]() ![]() So I think you should update soon :] I love this story so much. |
![]() ![]() Hey i absolutly love this story and can't wait for your next post and i hate to bring up somthing but i was abit confused in this chapter at damiens nonchallant mood towards kale and casey having sex as in one of the first few chapters he promised her that nothing sexual wasgoing to happen with her on his watch as virgin blood was sweeter and i just wanted to bring it up as i was't sure if you were aware of the contradictions but other than that absolutly brilliant story i love it,and it's really refreshing to read about vampires in a non gushy OMG he is so beutiful i love him, and forgive him for wanting to suck my blood twilighty way. keep on writing wonderful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very interesting story with lots of great characters and mysteries. I can't wait to find out why Casey is so important to Damien and Adrian. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. Thanks for writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry it took me this long to review, but I have to say this was yet another awesome chapter and revealed so much. Can't wait to see what happens next! I hope Kale gets his head torn off! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Damien is really a douche, I had forgotten what he was like in the previous chapters...Thanks for the reminder lol Looking forward to seeing what Adrian is going to do. |
![]() ![]() You got me addicted...i love this story, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Birthday?" was the next question. "March 5 1994." I was surprised that he didn't reprimand me for not referring to him as 'sir'. Woah. My birthday is March 5th 1994. If she had red hair, I'd say you were stalking me ;) Joking, but I just thought I'd mention the coincidence haha. Liking it so far, keep up the good work :) |
![]() ![]() Yeah, that girl on really did rip you off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, omg you made my day today, i jammed my finger and i was sulking all day long than bam saw the update (: liked the chapter, i agree with casey Adrian is all nice and all but hmm idk. cannot wait for the nextt update! and hope u have a good gradutation :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super duper awesome as usual! I only wish it were longer :( I didn't expect Damien's reaction at all when Kale tried to take advantage of Casey! I thought for sure he'd be a bit more protective like before. I hope he was trying to save face and being all Mr Darcey-like |
![]() ![]() I read the other story and compared...its similar, but not similar enough. I don't think this is plagiarism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was crazy good. it was defintally worth the wait. i cant wait for more. keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() Love, love, loved it! I just found this story...after 2 years of reading fictionpress I finally discovered this one. Is there anyway I could read the old version? My email is if you would be willing to send/share...i would be super happy it, but if not I understand. And as for the plagiarism thing...I would email her immediately, especially because she did comment on your story so you know she got it from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, update soon! |