Reviews for The Good Student
Prime Jeremy chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
I think it was boring and too short. And it was rather boring. How did it get 83 comments though?
M3rcy chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Very good, written in almost a humorous twisted way, which I like. I also thought the blood bit at the end was a nice touch.
OfPaperCranes chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Short and crisp. I like it.
Lulzier chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
OMG Short but attention-grabbing. So he was the one who killed this James, with a PENCIL?
Penelope Sweet chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Short, simple and to the point. Well done, nice insight into the mind of a killer i loved it, thank you.
Animal-Queen-Stephanie chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Ooohhh, gave me the chills. Wish you made this longer though, it could work good as a story, a boy that everybody thought was good could be out to kill you...dun dun dun!
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Old or not, this is really good despite the shortness. Simple and the way you built up the creepiness, real effective. Also some nice characterization...This guy's a psychotic boy for trying to imagine *sweat* when he already knew what the stuff was.
Fish E chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
SEVENTY-SIX REVIEWS? XD Well this one was definitely successful. Although, I feel like the ending was supposed to be a surprise, but for me I guess it didn't work. Anyway, besides that, it was really well written. The grammar was flawless, which is nice. The shortness of it was very professional, and a good concept. It's the sort've a story that is scary because of the maturity of how it was written, as opposed to senseless gore. I was impressed by it. You did a great job!
esthaelum chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
I LOVED THIS. It was morbid and gruesome... It started out very innocent, but I loved how you slowly revealed the darker side to this one shot, dragging it on to make it more suspenseful and freaky. I love how Luther seemed to be reassuring himself that maybe killing James was a good idea. It's just very realistic for someone to do that. I can also see why Luther killed him. James didn't sound very nice... The last line was wonderful. It was just so abrupt and morbid, I loved it! Wonderful job!
etto-sama chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
wow! this is awesome dude!

i should really learn from you!XDD

and thanks for the comment on my first writing!X3

i'm gonna improve more!X3
Silvren Raine chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Oh my. This kid is one creepy little psycho. LOL. Very interesting short story. Nice horror!
itsoveritsovernow chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
O_O Oh my my my my my. I did not see that coming.

The progression in this piece was so imaginative- I was hooked; I couldn't decipher Luther's sentiments towards James, and my opinion on the matter changed almost every sentence. I never would have anticipated the end!

Well done! :)
proudeyesneverlie chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Ooh, I love this! Very good portrayal of character ) Nice work~
Yezalb chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I really like this story.

Well written, excellent grammar and good suspense.

Great job! :D
LemonScience13 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Wah. That was *incredible.* I love stories with a sucker-punch ending like this. Excellent! :-) Thank you for posting.

~Emily

(P.S. - Reviews sometimes get you back-reviews. Thanks again! ;-D)
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