Awesome story. The beginning is a bit drawn out, and while it's a 'romance' it isn't really all that much of a romance, like I was looking for, but none the less I was pleasantly surprised.

It seemed a bit...dry? To me. I don't know, i just didn't get sucked in. It was well written and original though and I liked it.

~Leena

LOVE IT! I cant wait for the next part to come out! This is by far one of my favorite stories! I cant wait for the rest! Keep up the good work and please hurry w/ the next part! lol

later!

Emily

Sorry I haven't been reviewing! a bit busy lately, but I can't wait for the new story! Happy writing!

Good story! I really enjoyed it. Best of luck publishing it!

I love this story. Ill miss it when its gone. If you need any help editing Look me up. Anyway Cant wait for the Next part and if it gets published I will be the first one buying it.

Nise

I loved the Story and can't wait for the second one!

Hey!

I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE this story and I cant wait for the second part! good Luck with everything and keep up the good work!

later!

Emily

Yay I love it! I'm happy with how you ended it but I'm glad you're going to do a second one! So you're planning on getting this published? Yay again! If/when you do, could you let us readers know? Cause I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to buy it. Thanks for posting your story here, I really enjoyed it :)

No, thank you. :)

I'll be waiting, very impatiently mind you, for any updates that come my way. I enjoyed your story VERY much and am VERY sad to see it come to an end. Whenever I saw an update from you, I'd literally squeal (something I don't ever do). You are a very talented writer and I hope that one day I can buy your work in printed form.

And if you ever need another set of eyes, I'll gladly lend you mine.

Good luck!

This is most definately my favorite story here on fiction press! I loved reading it, and every day I'd rush on here to see if a new chapter had been written. You're a wonderful writer, and you'll do a great many things with that ability.

This story is absolutely brilliant. The dynamics between all of the pack feel like an actual family and each character has their own personality. As much as I like Michael sometimes, Elaine seems a little better for Gabriel in my mind. He's not as crazy-protective as Michael. But I cannot wait for the second one (I'm gonna die while you edit this. Editing may be a love for you, but I absolutely dread it) and hope to read more about this lovely world you've created.

Omg yay you making a sequel! I'm way way excited and happy! Oh and if your story becomes a book I'm so buying it!

~Raven

Omg its over I'm so sad! I cried because I was so sad... I really loved the story!

~Raven

I've followed this story since close to the beginning, sorry I haven't had time to review before, but reading is supposed to be the relaxing time.. and quite frankly most of the time I don't have enough time to type (or am awake enough to be coherent)

Just have to say I absolutely love this story. Your characters are so realistic... and I cannot wait to see the end. As much as I hate cliff hangers, and want the next part quickly... It WAS a great place to end the story. I don't know if you're familiar but it kind of reminds me of Rachel Vincent's "rogue". Ended on a cliffy also... totally pissed me off, but the book was still worth reading over and awaiting the sequal With all the crap that's on FP and the poor to mediocre writers that are "witholding" chapters until they get _ # of reviews, it's refreshing to see someone who not only writes well, but also does it for the joy of writing, rather than the review tally. Keep it up! You make me wish I still had time to write!

Michael and Elaine are so cute!

as usual, i cant wait for the next one