Reviews for CanisLupus
KiraLove chapter 28 . 11/15/2008
Sorry I haven't been reviewing! a bit busy lately, but I can't wait for the new story! Happy writing!
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 28 . 11/15/2008
Good story! I really enjoyed it. Best of luck publishing it!
Marnise chapter 28 . 11/15/2008
I love this story. Ill miss it when its gone. If you need any help editing Look me up. Anyway Cant wait for the Next part and if it gets published I will be the first one buying it.

Panda Blitz chapter 28 . 11/15/2008
I loved the Story and can't wait for the second one!
Emily Gildernick chapter 28 . 11/14/2008

I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE this story and I cant wait for the second part! good Luck with everything and keep up the good work!


Starlight529 chapter 28 . 11/14/2008
Yay I love it! I'm happy with how you ended it but I'm glad you're going to do a second one! So you're planning on getting this published? Yay again! If/when you do, could you let us readers know? Cause I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to buy it. Thanks for posting your story here, I really enjoyed it :)
Bada-Bing.Bada-Bang chapter 28 . 11/14/2008
No, thank you. :)

I'll be waiting, very impatiently mind you, for any updates that come my way. I enjoyed your story VERY much and am VERY sad to see it come to an end. Whenever I saw an update from you, I'd literally squeal (something I don't ever do). You are a very talented writer and I hope that one day I can buy your work in printed form.

And if you ever need another set of eyes, I'll gladly lend you mine.

Good luck!
omgvenom chapter 28 . 11/14/2008
This is most definately my favorite story here on fiction press! I loved reading it, and every day I'd rush on here to see if a new chapter had been written. You're a wonderful writer, and you'll do a great many things with that ability.
Raico chapter 28 . 11/14/2008
This story is absolutely brilliant. The dynamics between all of the pack feel like an actual family and each character has their own personality. As much as I like Michael sometimes, Elaine seems a little better for Gabriel in my mind. He's not as crazy-protective as Michael. But I cannot wait for the second one (I'm gonna die while you edit this. Editing may be a love for you, but I absolutely dread it) and hope to read more about this lovely world you've created.
gallowsCalibrator chapter 28 . 11/14/2008
Omg yay you making a sequel! I'm way way excited and happy! Oh and if your story becomes a book I'm so buying it!

gallowsCalibrator chapter 27 . 11/14/2008
Omg its over I'm so sad! I cried because I was so sad... I really loved the story!

Zatyrmoon chapter 28 . 11/14/2008
I've followed this story since close to the beginning, sorry I haven't had time to review before, but reading is supposed to be the relaxing time.. and quite frankly most of the time I don't have enough time to type (or am awake enough to be coherent)

Just have to say I absolutely love this story. Your characters are so realistic... and I cannot wait to see the end. As much as I hate cliff hangers, and want the next part quickly... It WAS a great place to end the story. I don't know if you're familiar but it kind of reminds me of Rachel Vincent's "rogue". Ended on a cliffy also... totally pissed me off, but the book was still worth reading over and awaiting the sequal With all the crap that's on FP and the poor to mediocre writers that are "witholding" chapters until they get _ # of reviews, it's refreshing to see someone who not only writes well, but also does it for the joy of writing, rather than the review tally. Keep it up! You make me wish I still had time to write!
Isabellamarie chapter 26 . 11/14/2008
Michael and Elaine are so cute!

as usual, i cant wait for the next one
Kyuuketsuki Fangirl chapter 27 . 11/14/2008
Aw, that was a nice ending, but I'm sad that it's done.

Oh well, I loved the story!

Also, I read the author's note in the next "chapter", and I wish you the best of luck on getting this published!
Kyuuketsuki Fangirl chapter 26 . 11/14/2008
I still feel so bad for Elaine's dad!

Well, at least all the other good guys got out alive.

Great chapter! I hope you update soon!
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