Reviews for CanisLupus
Alaeryel chapter 16 . 10/19/2013
GREAT CHAPTER here Canis and again I CANNOT SAY how much I AM ENJOYING THIS STORY! It is nice to see a softer side to Gabriel (if you can call it that)-I do so LOVE their little disagreements! I think I am beginning to really like Seb alot -even with him getting into so much trouble. I love the relationship he has with Elaine too-LOVED THE FLOWERS AND CARD! I wanted to fall over when I saw the softer side of Nathan too-didn't expect that at all.
Alaeryel chapter 15 . 10/19/2013
Well this isn't good at all and now my CURIOSITY IS REALLY KILLING ME with the remark Sebastian made about Leo! My first instinct was with El-'is he involved with Nicolais' pack' but he shook no but still not sure I would believe it! You are BLOODY KILLING ME WITH THE SUSPENSE AND TWISTS of this story! I LOVE a story that can pull so much EMOTIONS out of me and keeps me on my toes-YOU HAVE DONE AN ASTOUNDING JOB of that!
Alaeryel chapter 14 . 10/19/2013
I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED this side of Gabriel and I could feel the wind and adrenaline that was pumping thru El while on the back of the motorbike-I still remember the feel of it myself although has been years! I nearly wanted to jump out of skin when she saw Sebastian and am dying to know more about him (personally) than just the hit and miss you elude too! I had a feeling that those two would be in for some MAJOR SHIT when they got back but wow-BLOODY BRILLIANT chapter as always!
Alaeryel chapter 13 . 10/19/2013
I don't hear enough about Seb to form an opinion of him BUT I do like his carefree, being himself attitude but now he is in a pickle and I have to wonder what El is going to do about it! From what little I can gather of the Nicolais pack-you don't want to be on their bad side and I think that is where Seb finds himself now. I am so in love with Claire-she is a little doll. I have also come to the conclusion that El is suppose to Michael's mate-the signs are all there. I also LOVE Josh and his close knit family-makes me wish I had that when I was young but I THRIVE on families in stories that have that bond! ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER here Canis!
Alaeryel chapter 12 . 10/18/2013
I would like to see Lily back with the pack-I think it would be good for the both of them BUT I also know why she doesn't want to-I am just glad that she doesn't completely hate all werewolves and that she has a soft spot for El and vice a versa-GREAT CHAPTER! I also LOVED the water fight and when Alex was hit-NOW THAT WAS PRICELESS AND PERFECT!
Alaeryel chapter 11 . 10/18/2013
Well this is going to be very INTERESTING-her in London with all the brothers and then to meet with Leo-why do I get the feeling that this isn't going to go so well! I have 20minutes to get one more chapter in so on my way-OUTSTANDING JOB HERE!
Alaeryel chapter 10 . 10/18/2013
Well-THAT DIDN'T GO VERY WELL DID IT? I can't blame Josh-I wish I had a brother like him but my brother is worse than Sean. I don't see things going well for Sean at this point and I can't wait to see what happens to both him and Josh after the attack although I don't think he should be punished! Now I gotta go and read some more before I die of anxiety!
Alaeryel chapter 9 . 10/18/2013
I was wondering if maybe Caleb was a contender in the mate category for El but I didn't realize this part had happened. I almost want to say that Michael is El's mate but there is such an age difference between them. This story is ABSOLUTELY EXCEPTIONAL! The twists and turns are MAGNIFICENT!
Alaeryel chapter 8 . 10/18/2013
NO TIME-GOTTA GO-SEE WHAT HAPPENED-HAVING HEART ATTACK!
Alaeryel chapter 7 . 10/18/2013
My heart breaks for Pavel-I know EXACTLY where he is coming from-wanting the acceptance and love from a father that just couldn't show it BUT I do believe Nathan loves him-he just doesn't know how to express it-been there done that with my own father. It made it seem like you wrote the story of my life and this story means even more now because it has become personal to me! I am alittle upset with El for not telling why and what happened and how she came to be there thus protecting the prick named Sean but hey she has her reasons and I can deal with that! The way your mind works just down right ENTHRALLS ME and MESMERIZES ME!
Alaeryel chapter 6 . 10/18/2013
OMG OMG OMG-GOTTA GO NEED MORE-MAGNIFICENT CHAPTER!
Alaeryel chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
Well this can't be good one bit! I can almost guarantee you that I DO NOT NOR WILL I ever like Sean! That is not the kind of bad boy I like! GREAT WRITING and I know there is going to be hell to pay when they are found out! What I can't understand is what is going on with Cassiel and why he is going thru with this stunt-I definitely can't wait for more so on to the next chapter!
Alaeryel chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
I LOVED this one-it had me giggling and the fights/arguments between Gabriel and Elaine are PRICELESS! As to who my fave character is-I am unsure at this time as right now I love them all. I am leaning towards Gabriel as I am attracted to bad boys with anger issues-yes I know I am warped but this part where he lets loose and throws El in the river was GREAT!
Alaeryel chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
Ok I get that Elaine is a natural born female in the pack and that it holds something significant but outside of that I am confused as to what it is. I am also trying to puzzle out who exactly her mate is suppose to be in this story-as I am unable to do so at this time it makes the story more PERFECT to me! I am really ENJOYING it and the writing. It is easy to read even with the minimal spelling mistakes-and I mean VERY MINIMAL! I am ENTHRALLED with how your mind has come up with this story and the way you have the plot planned to perfection without your readers really knowing what is happening between the lines!
Alaeryel chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
Elaine is a bit feisty and headstrong isn't she-LOVE HER CHARACTER! My heart broke for Claire and Lily. Her pack doesn't know what they are in for with her really huh? Well actually they do seem to know her if Pavel was any sign to the fact. Great writing and loving the story immensely!
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