Ok I get that Elaine is a natural born female in the pack and that it holds something significant but outside of that I am confused as to what it is. I am also trying to puzzle out who exactly her mate is suppose to be in this story-as I am unable to do so at this time it makes the story more PERFECT to me! I am really ENJOYING it and the writing. It is easy to read even with the minimal spelling mistakes-and I mean VERY MINIMAL! I am ENTHRALLED with how your mind has come up with this story and the way you have the plot planned to perfection without your readers really knowing what is happening between the lines!

Elaine is a bit feisty and headstrong isn't she-LOVE HER CHARACTER! My heart broke for Claire and Lily. Her pack doesn't know what they are in for with her really huh? Well actually they do seem to know her if Pavel was any sign to the fact. Great writing and loving the story immensely!

This is a very well written story with very few mistakes that I saw-maybe two words misplaced and misspelled but I LOVE IT! It has already captured my attention and left me wanting more of it and also GLAD that I still have plenty chapters to read without having to wait for an update. I also love the fact that in just the first chapter I have a puzzle to figure out and those are the kind of stories that are ENDEARING TO ME! GREAT JOB!

Hi! I read this story years ago and it always stuck in my mind. Decided to read it again - still love it. I'm curious if you ever pursued writing after you 'graduated' from fictionpress and published any works or not ?

Nicky Charles

Speechless excitement. I must read the next. After then ill have more to say

Good gloppotty goodness! That was long! (;

I'm really loving this story! :D

I have read your story, both the first and second, and completely found them truly amazing. You writing is very engaging and well-written. A friend of mine recommended me your story, so I decided to read it and must say, was hooked from the beginning. I could not wait to see where the story went, and I was pleased with the ending. You really know what your doing. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read some of your other stories. Maybe one day your story could be published - keep that as a goal in mind, as you have all the potential to do so. :3

Wow.. just.. wow. No seriously this was awesome, you should get published (after you fix the minor mistakes here and there), but still it was great it had me anticipating every next move. Now im going to read the continuation. hope it's this good or better :3

This story was almost unbelievably awesome!

I come back to your story twice a year and am still blown away by how well written and beautiful it is. Thank you for writing this... I am in need for another story by you on the near future. Thanks again.

i loved it!

Look forward to the second!

Enjoying ur story. Trying to keep all te characters straight lol

Greaat story! I can't wait for the 2nd book to be published