Reviews for Lead
The Hippie Nerd chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I like this, even if you don't. :) A great image of someone dropping off their heart and the guy "opening" it up and letting the memories out. The opening stanza is great, especially the first two lines, emotional, desperate, downbeat and a great mood to them. Not sure why the last two words ("would care") are in a stanza on their own- it's a really good last line, but for some reason it's chopped up like that. But still, I liked this piece, good job.