Reviews for The Prisoner of Pendleton |
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![]() ![]() Wow. This story was amazing. I absolutely loved it (Helge is a male name, by the way - Helga is female.). And I really need to go to bed now, you've kept me from it long enough. ;) Fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This chapter was mind-blowing... |
![]() ![]() Love, love, love this! It was so romantic and beautiful! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! Made me tear up at the end too...I'm such a softie... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Vivaldia, you are quite talented. Our community has enjoyed your stories. In the month of May, this story will also be featured as an example of quality online fiction. Thank you so much for writing and sharing your work with all of us. Tiffany Madison on behalf of Fictionista Workshop |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh? I wonder who he is... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good, I can't wait to see what else is there to come! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT HIM TOO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... so cute, the Brigadier and the housekeeper! I can't wait to meet this new soldier. You truly have intrigued me. Great job! Karla |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this so much, rich descriptions and amazing wording. You're absolutely talented! Karla |
![]() ![]() ![]() Spectacular! Love the wording, the dialog and the plot. Very intriguing. Karla |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to comment on something. I don't know if your story is meant to be geographically correct but I will still remark on something. Sachsenhausen was not really in Berlin. I was there last year and it was perharps 40 km away from Berlin. I don't know if you said that it was really in Berlin... Because it is really in the country outside of Berlin. Nevermind. Your story is still absorbing. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How do you DO it? how do you write such nice stories? they are whole and complex and have these lovely plots and history to them (by the way, how do you know so much history!), and the characters are all so fleshed out too! absolutely amazing. I probably have nothing new to add. your stories remind me of each other but each have their own unique flavor. thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story at your recommendation...and I am speechless! It is THAT good! Amazing job! And of course, thank you for completing it. It is so sad when a good story is abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! It's very well written, and the characters and plot were excellent. Congrats on your lovely work! |