Reviews for The Prisoner of Pendleton |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yay you updated! :D I can't wait for more! I like where you decided to take the story, but im sorry lizzie had to go through all that. i hope you update again soon so we can see if she and john are reunited :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow the only word I can think of how to describe this chapter is intense, and even that doesn't seem to cover it right. It was really good. Have a Merry Christmas! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! That was definitely a shock! I can't wait to see what happens next! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() These chapters were so sad! I feel so bad for both Lizzie and John, moreso for him because he had no idea why she had to leave. I really enjoy stories where you can actually feel for the characters; you've done a good job with making them likeable. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! They're so perfect for each other! Oh happy days! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry it's taken me so long to review this one! Report cards were due, and then there were parent teacher conferences! But, I got an unexpected gift and woke up to find that school had been cancelled for the day :) So, I had some extra time on my hands, and was excited to read! I'm so excited for Lizzy and John! This was such a cute scene, I just love the two of them together, their good natured teasing and their love is obvious. Yay for their engagement! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well if proposing after you fall out of a boat into a dirty lake isn't romantic, I don't know what is. I have loved this story since the first chapter. I think it is adorably romantic and I was always looking for the next chapter, but now there isn't one! and I am sad. So please update soon, there is lots more we need to know! How does everyone feel? what about their wedding and children and EVERYTHING? :D beyond being adorable with wonderful characters and plot btw, your writing is really good. I like how you split everything up to keep it organized (paragraph wise). So thank you :D Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sweet! Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You HAVE to update soon! Or is that the end? Ah! If it isn't you must update. I love this story! Its gripping and and . . . amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! - Very Jane Eyre-ian! But in a subtle, play-on-a-reservoir-of-English-literature way. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I love that they're together! Whoot! Good chapter! Sorry, not much else for me to say...haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I can't wait for the update! She has to tell him! And hopefully she'll comfort him through his shell shock again. You've been updating these past three chapters so quickly I hope it will be another speedy update! I feel so bad that the major has a misconception of her feelings! Excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! This is going to be short, because I have to read on! Just...ah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry it's been so long since I've reviewed! It's been a crazy couple weeks. Anyway, loved this chapter! I love that Lizzy felt remorse for her actions, and that the Major realized he was being incosiderate! I loved that he just held her while she cried at the end! I am so loving their relationship right now! Was that enough loving for you in one review! haha. Reading on! |