Cool story

Beh. She could prove it anyway. The evidence is her body after all.

Thanks for the story. It was a good read :)

I've read this story at least 4 times now in the last 3 years (I think the first time was back just before it was finished) , and every time I come back, I can't help but love it. 3 It is a great piece of work and I'm glad I found it.

Very satisfying ending of what happened to Kirk, he deserved the fullest extent of that. Had a pleasure reading this story :D.

Read one of your older works years ago and sought you out to see if there was more- and discovered The Chancers! What a delightful surprise!

Oh my goodness I loooove this story! And do you think you could write a story for Stefan? everyone deserves love, but some more than most. And I think he's one of those people, just a suggestion.

I love the plot and the characters, but you have got to stop capitalizing every other word for emphasis. Only amateur writers use cheap things like that. You don't need that. Just decapitalize all those words and you have an even more amazing story.

I love the plot and the characters, but you have got to stop capitalizing every other word for emphasis. Only amateur writers use cheap things like that. You don't need that. Just decapitalize all those words and you have an even more amazing story.

i ? But I liked the characters and i like how at the end, we see the little girl. What is she?

I love it, but I want to see more of Karl!

i love this so much that i keep coming back to reread it :) you should write a story about stefan finding his mate :D and then callie, dmitri, dark, karl etc. could all still be in the story :) i would love to read that ;)

Absolutly loved it, would love to read more about Calli and Dimytri's family.

Great story! Good job! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

WOW! That was quite the ride. I couldn't stop reading this story until I got to the end. I hope you write more soon!