Reviews for Not to be Untangled
Shante chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I really like this poem...it was mad deep...loved the intertwining of the dreams with reality!
Delany Lamb chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
That is such a lovely piece of writing.

Very powerful and moving.

The use of rhyme is very effective in creating a rhythm that the reader can relax into. I love the way you discribe the young man hanging himself. It is nearly surprising. Very interesting.