Reviews for Escape Ch 1?
Coneyisland-Girl chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
wow...not only suspensful in the sense of "will he make it" but the writing and descriptions ..especially b4 the man is introduced...is suspensful with silent life and struggle...you can just feel it..very good...some of the detail gets a little tedious and made me want to skim..like when he falls the third time..maybe you can change the sentence structuring up a little bit...just a thought..other than that... i think this has the making of a novel.