Reviews for Mathclass
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I have to say personally I think the bolding was a bit much. Also, you change your rhyme scheme halfway through which bothered me. That said the content of the piece was nice, it has a lot of really great descriptions and it's really relateable (or parts of it are anyway)
Coneyisland-Girl chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
nice vocab! "frieze" haha i had to look that one up. it sounded like you were describing a picture you see in a grocery store of those women holding up a cabbage and smiling at you like it's the greatest cabbage in the world and she loves it...almost..anyways that's what crossed my mind but then again i am kinda weird...i love the comparison of the walls to this "she". you can find metaphors in everything and anything and i think this is a really great one