Reviews for Raindrops
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
"Falling, falling… Like meteors"... I don't see why you capitalized like

"Some engulfing others Some pushing away from the crowd" again capitalizing some

I do like the personification though in the piece, it's really interesting, definitely not your typical rain poem at all. The descriptions you have here are so unique and really well thought out. Wonderful piece.

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