Reviews for Red Rainstorm
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
At first I was worried that this subject matter was a bit cliched and I was worried where you were going, but it worked really well, actually.

I liked the whole idea of a red rainstorm because you went into detail with it, but without letting it get to angsty or cliched. I also liked the way you described your pain, it was really unique. Usually this kind of image is used for personal pain, but you do it about loss, which is interesting.

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mylittlefirefly chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Nice poem. I especially liked the last paragraph ) The emotion was there, and it was well portrayed through the words. It's always hard to lose someone that we care so much about. . .