lol, lov it!

WOW, THAT WAS SO FUNNY!

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HYSTERICAL! keep it up!

This was cute! I actually laughed out loud a few times. Good job.

LOL the wrath of the rubber ducky... I can just imagine the scenario _

o_0 Kinda disturbing, actually.

hahaha, this piece was hysterical, I liked it a lot. The part in the beginning about the impending doom was a nice description. The only thing is you have "..." and the next line is about not hearing her. Did she say something softly? Or did she say nothing? That confused me. Other than that I liked it a lot.

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That was cool! I liked it! It was simple and yet still surprisingly funny! WOW! I didn't think you could write humor that simple and still have it be quality! COOL!

Write on!



PS: This is going in my C2!

an extremely funny story, keep on writing!

I love the sarcasm, weirdness, and the humor. Absolutely hilarious.

-T.I.N.

aww... haha that was cute

this was BRILLIANT! I love your sarcastic style of writing - "Scarlett, being the observant girl that she is, kept doodling, unaware of her impending doom". it was funny how her "impending doom" turned out to be a rubber ducky. I also loved how you didn't explain why she was so afraid of it - it leaves a lot up to the imagination.

cute! it reminded me vaguely of my sister and me :)

(falls out of chair) That was so funny. I think I'm going to cry.